Reed Richard's desire to learn began at an early age, when his mother, Evelyn, died. From that time, his father raised and educated him, recognizing his son's intellect. At the age of 14, Reed was already taking college-level courses and had attended four universities earning various degrees before leaving his teens. Victor von Doom, unlike Richards, had a tragic childhood. He was born in Latveria, a small European town raised outside of Hungary. Victor barely knew his mother, Cynthia, a witch who had called upon the demon Mephisto for power, who raged out of control before she was finally killed by a soldier. Before he died, he asked his father, Werner, to protect young Victor from Mephisto. Eventually Victor's father, a doctor, was treating the king's wife. When Werner failed to cure his cancer, Vladimir blamed him for his wife's death and Werner eloped with Victor. Werner died from exposure to the cold while protecting his son. Before he died, Werner placed Victor in the care of his best friend, Boris, and tried to warn his son of the fearful life he predicted he would fall into, but he died before he could make Victor understand. After discovering his mother's mystical artifacts, Victor trained in sorcery. He began a yearly contest against Mephisto, attempting to free his mother's soul. By the time he was a teenager, he had also become a scientific genius and used his inventions to wage a one-man war against the monarchy of Latveria, always one step ahead of them. His genius was also known in America and he was invited on a scholarship to Empire State University in New York. And while Victor was in love with Boris's niece Valeria, but left her behind because he wished to gain knowledge and...... middle of the paper ...... reads this text, it will be clear to him that I am interested in and understand the 'topic Word Choice My words are specific and used correctly so that my readers know exactly what I mean All my words and phrases are natural, effective and appropriate; some of them are even memorable and powerful. Sentence FlowMy sentences are put together well and in a way that enhances the meaning.I use a variety of sentence lengths and structures in my workWhen I read my work aloud, it flows well and has rhythm ConventionsI have revised my spelling, capitalization and punctuation are correct My grammar, paragraphing and usage are correct and help me define my style while communicating clearly Presentation Formatting fits the purpose of the work I use the appropriate amount of white space on the page Use appropriate fonts and font sizes, titles and headings Word count: